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TheDeathMeister

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The Background looks good but you should practice on anatomy more tho because there's a lot of errors with her form, nice work tho

Does overexercise makes a leg that big or weird looking when bended? Nice work tho

Skoobart responds:

lots of squats?? :)

The concept and shading look great but ther lips are a bit misplaced tho

Skoobart responds:

Thanks! I notice all my heads seem to get a little 'off balance' in certain spots and I'm not sure why lol thanks for pointing that out!

She looks Cute but her shoulders are uneven and her eyes need sclera ( The white part of the eye ) and the highlight on her nose is a bit misplaced but overall it looks great

pandayame responds:

*take down notes* Will try to improve on that. Thank you very much! :D

Looks great bro but if you look closely you kinda messed up with her jaw

pandayame responds:

That's the wind that blew her hair away. Anyway, I'm still trying to improve my drawing skills. Thank you very much for taking the time to write your feedbacks :D

It looks OK but try not to overlap tho because the hair will look connected to each other in a weird way ( Like you did on the middle of her head ) and give it different shadings of the color for it to look better nad more realistic

ohwhatawalrus responds:

Thanks dude! I will certainly try. I definitely see what you mean about the middle part of the head too, I think it could be due to the fact that I layered it and played with the opacity. Definitely need to get better at using colour.

Looks great bro but what's with her jaw? and why is her hand shaded like that?

Damn...

Looks amazing bro i really like it but would you mind giving him spiked teeth?

The idea is quite nice though i'd like to make some opinions

- Try making her fingers look connected to each other ( because it looks chaotic in there )
- Try making her equipment like a gauntlet that extends to her elbow
- Try making her look a bit curvy ( she looks like a plank )
- Give her chest-piece more details
- Give her straight hair instead of curly ( It might make her look more futuristic )
- Try giving the apple on her head more details ( Ex. make it look like a Crown )
- And try experimenting on face anatomy

Youkos responds:

This is actually the most simple form she takes. If I actually manage to get everything I want done in the vn, she'll probably have alternate and more refined-looking appearances. (She's supposed to look on a plank -cough cough-)

Thanks for the comment though~

Looks great bro but why is she still wearing her hat when shes in her prime? and her nose is quite awkwardly drawn and try not to make her look like a hunchback but other that that it looks quite nice

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