TheDeathMeister's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Morrigan]

The shading looks good but she doeasnt really resembles Morrigan tho and try to draw minor details like her collar bone because every little bit helps nad something wrong with her right hand

GiN-Art responds:

thank you for your criticism.
perhaps it is more like Morrigan's hot mother =D.

[Daredevil Comission]

Does overexercise makes a leg that big or weird looking when bended? Nice work tho

Skoobart responds:

lots of squats?? :)

[Walking Dead themed commission]

The concept and shading look great but ther lips are a bit misplaced tho

Skoobart responds:

Thanks! I notice all my heads seem to get a little 'off balance' in certain spots and I'm not sure why lol thanks for pointing that out!

[Korra on the Beach]

She looks Cute but her shoulders are uneven and her eyes need sclera ( The white part of the eye ) and the highlight on her nose is a bit misplaced but overall it looks great

pandayame responds:

*take down notes* Will try to improve on that. Thank you very much! :D

[Madoka Fanart]

Looks great bro but if you look closely you kinda messed up with her jaw

pandayame responds:

That's the wind that blew her hair away. Anyway, I'm still trying to improve my drawing skills. Thank you very much for taking the time to write your feedbacks :D

[Hair Practice]

It looks OK but try not to overlap tho because the hair will look connected to each other in a weird way ( Like you did on the middle of her head ) and give it different shadings of the color for it to look better nad more realistic

ohwhatawalrus responds:

Thanks dude! I will certainly try. I definitely see what you mean about the middle part of the head too, I think it could be due to the fact that I layered it and played with the opacity. Definitely need to get better at using colour.

[AI Afal]

The idea is quite nice though i'd like to make some opinions

- Try making her fingers look connected to each other ( because it looks chaotic in there )
- Try making her equipment like a gauntlet that extends to her elbow
- Try making her look a bit curvy ( she looks like a plank )
- Give her chest-piece more details
- Give her straight hair instead of curly ( It might make her look more futuristic )
- Try giving the apple on her head more details ( Ex. make it look like a Crown )
- And try experimenting on face anatomy

Youkos responds:

This is actually the most simple form she takes. If I actually manage to get everything I want done in the vn, she'll probably have alternate and more refined-looking appearances. (She's supposed to look on a plank -cough cough-)

Thanks for the comment though~

["For Valentine's Day 2014"]

Well, that looks... erotic but would you mind fix her foot placement it looks weird and her nose need some work as well

reddishbeige responds:

Thank you for your comment and great critique. I heed your opinion and will work on the anatomy more.

[Daydreaming]

Nice work but would you mind adding more details it might improve the artwork

reddishbeige responds:

Well, thank you for your respond here too! I'm glad to read useful advices and helpful comments. This drawing has been done in these days, and I thought it was good enough compared to my capabilities.
I was satisfied with the coloring and wasn't satisfied with the shapes but now I'm dissatisfied with everything about this drawing, so I continue the practising.

[Zyra - Lol]

Looks great bro love the way you mixed up the colors and the lighting and shadow effects are just as good as well

Lightning05 responds:

Thank you im steel trying to improve my self and keep learning
and my english sucks xD